Looks fun and miss en scene is used well. However some of the shots seems pointless e.g. the stairs. This is because it doesn't really fit in with a party atmosphere. Maybe more people. Other than that well done! Mae, and Laura
shakey shots could be improved as not stable enough location is good but maybe more people would give it a better affect as its a party song its unclear who the main singer is as you don't use much lip syncing
Quite slow paced for the mood of the song. More shots could be used to improve the mise en scene and movement. As well, more close ups would have been effective
Camera is unsteady at times but good use of mid shots and long shots
hey babe. good video, love the song. shoulda got more people in the video and make it a bit more fast paced. make it more club like, so like lower lighting and dance and that. love vish xx
Mise en Scene and theme of video fit the music very well. Lip syncing can be off at times, and a few more people may have made it stronger.
ReplyDeleteLooks fun and miss en scene is used well. However some of the shots seems pointless e.g. the stairs. This is because it doesn't really fit in with a party atmosphere. Maybe more people. Other than that well done! Mae, and Laura
ReplyDeleteFraming of shots could be improved, it's shakey in some parts which makes the camera blurry.
ReplyDeleteIn our opinion the location and lighting looks as if it hasn't really been considered.
Is there only three of you? more people would have improved the theme of the song and made the video more exciting.
It's unclear who the main singer is as theres isn't that much lip-syncing.
Although, the idea of the video fits the song choice well and costumes look the part.
From Mattie and Steph
shakey shots could be improved as not stable enough
ReplyDeletelocation is good but maybe more people would give it a better affect as its a party song
its unclear who the main singer is as you don't use much lip syncing
Quite slow paced for the mood of the song. More shots could be used to improve the mise en scene and movement. As well, more close ups would have been effective
ReplyDeleteCamera is unsteady at times but good use of mid shots and long shots
hey babe.
ReplyDeletegood video, love the song. shoulda got more people in the video and make it a bit more fast paced. make it more club like, so like lower lighting and dance and that.
love vish xx