Final/ending plan with location shots

The final scen will feature Travis walking into a 'house party'
In this clip I am planning on showing him, walking towards the house, entering the house, greeting people, and then shots of him drinking shots with friends for the final clip as the music starts to blur out.

Examples of locations and examples shots I plan to use :
Although this doesnt show the right house or even the right setting or actor, it shows my desired shot of someone walking towards the house and front door with the camera behind him almost following him into the house.

Another shot within the 'party' will be pouring drinks/shots and drinking them together in a party/friendship atmosphere. Here are some examples of what my shots may look simular too.

I am also hoping to get some lip syncing and performance shots of Travis within the party, I am planning on having a simular style to Kid Cudi's Just what i am video where he is singing and he has the party behind him, hes there drinking with mates, having a good time.

Opening scene. Getting ready examples

typical shots of what Travis might look like getting ready:

Plus the idea for the very first scene will be him plugging in his ipod, and starting the music to play. An example of what this may look like would be

final video plan

Start/Opening http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uSD4vsh1zDA - getting ready at home Middle http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGbP_kTM4CA - (Kid Cudi Just what I am) party scene with lip syncing

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Feedback

I showed my teachers and some classmates my video so far asking for their view and to write me some feedback on it
 There have been some very good ideas, and have given me good advice to make the whole video clearer, for example, making the lead singer more obvious and to use more lip syncing to allow him to look more obvious. Much of the feedback was postive towards my video, but some also added tips and pointers as what they would do different, for example to add a montage of pouring and drinking drinks.

Possible photos for digipak,poster and actors

emmerson!'s photostream on Flickr.

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emmerson!'s photostream on Flickr.

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