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I showed my teachers and some classmates my video so far asking for their view and to write me some feedback on it
 There have been some very good ideas, and have given me good advice to make the whole video clearer, for example, making the lead singer more obvious and to use more lip syncing to allow him to look more obvious. Much of the feedback was postive towards my video, but some also added tips and pointers as what they would do different, for example to add a montage of pouring and drinking drinks.

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I need to think of what i shall be filming, and where, as I am filming at night and wish to use street lighting I will have to pick a good time where it wont be to dark, and I will have to think of locations, maybe a skate park, town or another local area. Also I shall have to think about what the actors will be doing in the video, I will have to think of more than what i had in mind, maybe use new and more ideas, for example getting ready to go out, drinking etc.