Feedback

I showed my teachers and some classmates my video so far asking for their view and to write me some feedback on it
 There have been some very good ideas, and have given me good advice to make the whole video clearer, for example, making the lead singer more obvious and to use more lip syncing to allow him to look more obvious. Much of the feedback was postive towards my video, but some also added tips and pointers as what they would do different, for example to add a montage of pouring and drinking drinks.

Kid Cudi - Erase me

I like the clips that show there 'average every day life' it shows them partying and having a laugh and enjoying themselves together drinking and smoking etc. 1:33-1:56 I also like the clip between 3:08-3:18, this is because not only does it show them working on their music but they are still having a laugh and enjoybing themselves, showing they enjoy their job.

digipak idea

After recieving feedback on my digipak draft, i have decided to remove the 'hello my name is' section on the CD cover. Instead I am going to make it almost as in introduction page, stating who made it and what it's called.
I found an image of what mine may look simular to.


My version of this will be different because it will have different, fonts and font sizes, different colours, and will look unique and obviously include different phrases.

Travis welcomes you to

LIVE YOUR LIFE

faith, believe, hope.

Amen.

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advert-draft 1

DIGIPAK DRAFT

digi pak

photo ideas